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lotusk ([personal profile] lotusk) wrote2015-05-16 06:46 am

Tug

Title: Tug
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jongin/Kyungsoo
Length: ~8.7k, Total: ~13.4k
Summary: Kyungsoo is a no-nonsense college student who lives a quiet, ordinary life filled with studying, assignments and exams. But on Tuesdays and Thursdays, he has Creative Writing classes and he gets to spend time with tall, gorgeous Jongin. One Thursday, Jongin shows up with braids and all Kyungsoo can think about is tugging on them ...
Genre: Romance, fluff, smut, college!au
Notes: Written for [livejournal.com profile] teatimetaemint and Shayne. This fic was inspired by this pic of wolf era Jongin and the prompt is teatimetaemint's!
Warnings: long-haired Jongin with braids and earrings, goth!Chanyeol, badly written smut, frottage, public sex, hair kink (kind of?)


What made him stand out was the straight, long black hair that ended about an inch above his shoulder. He'd pulled back half of it carelessly with a rubber band while the rest of it tumbled around his neck in messy strands. Twin hoops of fine silver hugged the lobes of finely formed ears, and his face. . .

[identity profile] mutantbic.livejournal.com 2015-05-15 11:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Help me out here I think I'm hyperventilating hahaa.

Kyungsoo is not alone I wanting to yank on Nini's hair...

Everything about this is YES.💖
bluedreaming: digital art of a person overlaid with blue, with ace-aro-agender buttons (nana red lips)

[personal profile] bluedreaming 2015-05-16 01:05 am (UTC)(link)
This was absolutely gorgeous Adele AND NOT TRASH AT ALL and the way you made them go slow and worked the hair into everything and it was all kinds of beautiful. You don't write "plots" as you call it, you write wonderfully poignant moments of connection between people, and if that's not good enough then I don't think anything else is either.

*Huffs in your general direction*

[identity profile] rjaejoo.livejournal.com 2015-05-16 03:00 am (UTC)(link)

Ok this is just so freaking adorable.  Ahh...it brings back memories of falling for someone and the tentative getting to know each other and then that something more happening.  Great story and thanks for sharing this!

[identity profile] sammylovesblue.livejournal.com 2015-05-16 04:41 am (UTC)(link)
OH MY GOODNESS I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS SINCE FOREVER I THOUGHT YOU'LL NEVER GET TO FINISH IT AND ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT IT'S WORTH THE WAIT

[identity profile] amaxingbaek.livejournal.com 2015-05-16 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
NO DAMN IT, MY INTERNET CRASHED AND I LOST MY COMMENT. Ugh, good thing I write it on another doc, but T.T Anyways! I'm about 98% positive that this is going to end up needing two boxes for the entire comment. I apologize in advance if this is incoherent...because it is and I don't think it's what you're really looking for in a comment, but I'm going with it anyways.

I’m about 98% positive this comment is going to take up two comments, but that’s...not bad right? I just have a lot to flail and spazz about and I’m sorry in advance for the lack of coherency that this comment will have OTL.

As far as Kyungsoo was concerned, he firmly belonged in the pure nerd category with his glasses and boring haircut and nondescript clothing.
HELL YEAH, NERDS UNITE. I hate the stereotypes that come with looking a certain way, but eh, I’m a nerd. I look like one and I act like one so lol. Kyungsoo and I are spirit animals...although I don’t like math and numbers like he does. Maybe only nerdy spirit animals? I don’t even know.

trying not to feel thrilled that someone as good looking as Kai had actually remembered his name.
D’awww that’s cute. Don’t ask why I think that’s cute, I just...cute.

He looked up to see a very tall, gangly boy dressed in a ripped black tee, black leather jacket embedded with zippers, buckles and studs, and ripped black jeans
YELLS. RIGHT, RIPPED BLACK JEANS. BE STILL MY HEART.

asked to do 5 minutes of free writing on the topic: ATTRACTION,
Of course it’s attraction /snickers

Kyungsoo was relieved to see that Kai didn't gobble his food, chew with his mouth open or talk with his mouth full.
YELLS, YES. I /hate/ when people do that I just-ugh. Yes, Kyungsoo is me and I am Kyungsoo, I declare it. Except I don’t...shut up. And I don't like numbers. BUT ANYWAYS. NERDY SPIRIT ANIMALS.

"Oh my God, you played too?" Jongin leaned forward, forearms pressing against the edge of the table
AWWWW cute babies having anime in common. I’m rolling around in the cute right now and I’m only a quarter of the way through. But /glances at rating
Maybe not all of it is cute :p

Kyungsoo had to stop himself from reaching out to tuck the loose strands behind Jongin's ear.
/squeaks

"I never said I didn't have a pen or pencil," Jongin said cryptically.
/SCREAMS

As it was, he enjoyed his company far too much—his warm and witty personality and the fact that they could talk about anything and everything, and the fact that things never seemed awkward between them. No, it wasn't a good idea to get attached at all
/whines pathetically

How was he going to write about BLISS for five whole minutes with Jongin so close by?
/snickers. I feel like that won’t be a problem at all, but Kyungsoo is being stubborn so...

Ohhhhh oh oh I liked the car analogy. The accident itself scary, but the way you wove it in so effortlessly and wonderfully has me sitting her in awe...and slight jealous because I wish I could do something like that.

[identity profile] read0write.livejournal.com 2015-05-16 07:04 am (UTC)(link)
wah~ that was so nice and like yes and yes and yes and just alsdfj;lasdkjfl;adsjaf
but omg chanyeol wanting to hit on kyungsoo but jongin cockblocking XDDD that's too adorable
but ha! i had a feeling jongin kept borrowing the pen because he liked kyungsoo, just so he could keep talking to him or such
heeheehee so cute~
and kyungsoo all worried about his grades but with his major, definitely need to worry :3 but so cute, jongin was definitely adorable :)

[identity profile] denimgege.livejournal.com 2015-05-16 07:19 am (UTC)(link)

/emits small noises of distress/ THIS IS AMAZING OHHUGJUGJUHGU


Tho i cant picture jongin with long hair ;A; i wonder how he'd look like o)--(

Edited 2015-05-16 07:20 (UTC)

[identity profile] whyplanet26.livejournal.com 2015-05-16 12:50 pm (UTC)(link)
adele ;;;;;;;;
i swear to the skies above you write such wonderful and incredible things and im just *whimpers at the awesomeness*
every time i read something of your it feels just so real and believable because of all the details and emotions and the inner dialogue. its just amazing.
that aside, LONG HAIR JONGINNNNNNN such cutie. im totally in love with nerd! soo tho he is just so adorkable at all times that i wanna pet him and tell him to chill and live life a bit.
also goth chanyeol and his ripped attires. bless your mind, lady. cuz im smitten.

<3

[identity profile] illusiontooreal.livejournal.com 2015-05-16 05:30 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG FIRSTLY. I FLINCHED SO HARD WHEN I SAW "OCTAGON THEATRE" AND "TATTERSALL" OMGGGG UWA YOOOO. AhhhhHhhHHHHH
AAhhhhHhhHHHHHhhHhhHHHHH. (octagon is so far away from everything omg)

Okay going back to read the rest of it. I got super excited there HAHA

[identity profile] ryousuke-kazaf.livejournal.com 2015-05-24 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
Ahhhhhhh Nini in braid is my favourite! I enjoy reading this!