Tug

[lotusk]

Title: Tug
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jongin/Kyungsoo
Length: ~8.7k, Total: ~13.4k
Summary: Kyungsoo is a no-nonsense college student who lives a quiet, ordinary life filled with studying, assignments and exams. But on Tuesdays and Thursdays, he has Creative Writing classes and he gets to spend time with tall, gorgeous Jongin. One Thursday, Jongin shows up with braids and all Kyungsoo can think about is tugging on them ...
Genre: Romance, fluff, smut, college!au
Notes: Written for teatimetaemint and Shayne. This fic was inspired by this pic of wolf era Jongin and the prompt is teatimetaemint's!
Warnings: long-haired Jongin with braids and earrings, goth!Chanyeol, badly written smut, frottage, public sex, hair kink (kind of?)


What made him stand out was the straight, long black hair that ended about an inch above his shoulder. He'd pulled back half of it carelessly with a rubber band while the rest of it tumbled around his neck in messy strands. Twin hoops of fine silver hugged the lobes of finely formed ears, and his face. . .

Comments

[mutantbic.livejournal.com]

Help me out here I think I'm hyperventilating hahaa.

Kyungsoo is not alone I wanting to yank on Nini's hair...

Everything about this is YES.💖

[bluedreaming]

This was absolutely gorgeous Adele AND NOT TRASH AT ALL and the way you made them go slow and worked the hair into everything and it was all kinds of beautiful. You don't write "plots" as you call it, you write wonderfully poignant moments of connection between people, and if that's not good enough then I don't think anything else is either.

*Huffs in your general direction*

[rjaejoo.livejournal.com]

Ok this is just so freaking adorable.  Ahh...it brings back memories of falling for someone and the tentative getting to know each other and then that something more happening.  Great story and thanks for sharing this!

[sammylovesblue.livejournal.com]

OH MY GOODNESS I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS SINCE FOREVER I THOUGHT YOU'LL NEVER GET TO FINISH IT AND ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT IT'S WORTH THE WAIT

[amaxingbaek.livejournal.com]

NO DAMN IT, MY INTERNET CRASHED AND I LOST MY COMMENT. Ugh, good thing I write it on another doc, but T.T Anyways! I'm about 98% positive that this is going to end up needing two boxes for the entire comment. I apologize in advance if this is incoherent...because it is and I don't think it's what you're really looking for in a comment, but I'm going with it anyways.

I’m about 98% positive this comment is going to take up two comments, but that’s...not bad right? I just have a lot to flail and spazz about and I’m sorry in advance for the lack of coherency that this comment will have OTL.

As far as Kyungsoo was concerned, he firmly belonged in the pure nerd category with his glasses and boring haircut and nondescript clothing.
HELL YEAH, NERDS UNITE. I hate the stereotypes that come with looking a certain way, but eh, I’m a nerd. I look like one and I act like one so lol. Kyungsoo and I are spirit animals...although I don’t like math and numbers like he does. Maybe only nerdy spirit animals? I don’t even know.

trying not to feel thrilled that someone as good looking as Kai had actually remembered his name.
D’awww that’s cute. Don’t ask why I think that’s cute, I just...cute.

He looked up to see a very tall, gangly boy dressed in a ripped black tee, black leather jacket embedded with zippers, buckles and studs, and ripped black jeans
YELLS. RIGHT, RIPPED BLACK JEANS. BE STILL MY HEART.

asked to do 5 minutes of free writing on the topic: ATTRACTION,
Of course it’s attraction /snickers

Kyungsoo was relieved to see that Kai didn't gobble his food, chew with his mouth open or talk with his mouth full.
YELLS, YES. I /hate/ when people do that I just-ugh. Yes, Kyungsoo is me and I am Kyungsoo, I declare it. Except I don’t...shut up. And I don't like numbers. BUT ANYWAYS. NERDY SPIRIT ANIMALS.

"Oh my God, you played too?" Jongin leaned forward, forearms pressing against the edge of the table
AWWWW cute babies having anime in common. I’m rolling around in the cute right now and I’m only a quarter of the way through. But /glances at rating
Maybe not all of it is cute :p

Kyungsoo had to stop himself from reaching out to tuck the loose strands behind Jongin's ear.
/squeaks

"I never said I didn't have a pen or pencil," Jongin said cryptically.
/SCREAMS

As it was, he enjoyed his company far too much—his warm and witty personality and the fact that they could talk about anything and everything, and the fact that things never seemed awkward between them. No, it wasn't a good idea to get attached at all
/whines pathetically

How was he going to write about BLISS for five whole minutes with Jongin so close by?
/snickers. I feel like that won’t be a problem at all, but Kyungsoo is being stubborn so...

Ohhhhh oh oh I liked the car analogy. The accident itself scary, but the way you wove it in so effortlessly and wonderfully has me sitting her in awe...and slight jealous because I wish I could do something like that.

[amaxingbaek.livejournal.com]

There was no mistaking the small, low moan Jongin made as Kyungsoo pulled gently on the hair twined around his fingers.
!!!! Important opening sentence!!

"I saw what you did there, Kyungsoo. Smooth." Chanyeol gave him a thumbs up as he walked past in his signature ripped, black jeans.
Lmfao Chanyeol! BUT AGAIN, BLACK RIPPED JEANS. ARE YOU TRYING TO HURT ME? I know he's Goth, but like !!!! Arg.

"That thing you did with Kai's hair. Niiiice. Like foreplay, right?"
I snorted lol.

A few steps later, he was standing in front of Jongin, whose fingers were playing with the single chain that hung from his belt and draped across the black denim covering his left thigh.
FFFFFFF /MORE/ BLACK JEANS?!

The moonlight threaded through the ginkgo trees, casting tiny, fan-shaped shadows on the grass and the backs of their hands.
Ahhh the descriptions you write are so beautiful that I always have to kind of stop and catch my breath. I don’t know what it is, but the little details like this, the things that people would normally gloss over, are so wonderful. A beautiful addition.

"I liked it so much the first time you did it. And I hope you'll do it again."
/gurgles incoherently

“Please,” Jongin whispered again. . .just before he carefully removed Kyungsoo’s glasses and his lips fit gently over Kyungsoo’s
/SCREAMS

Right now, all Kyungsoo knew was that he wanted Jongin, wanted more of him.
YEEEEEES. GO KYUNGSOO GO.

“What do you want, Jongin?” he asked as he nibbled on his collarbones.
COLLARBONES. I’M SO WEAK FOR COLLARBONES. WHY ARE YOU (UNINTENTIONALLY) HURTING ME LIKE THIS.

"No one has crushes on me."
:( Kyungsoo.

“Indirect handholding?!”
WHAT THE HELL THIS IS SO CUTE. JONGIN IS SO CUTE. DUMB, BUT SO CUTE. And...Kyungsoo /face palms. You don’t know what an indirect kiss is?!

"I promise I’ll be the best boyfriend. I’ll get you coffee when you have assignments due and stay up with you and I’ll keep you company in the library when you have to study. And I’ll study too and work on getting my GPA up."
T.T T.T T.T The ideal that is Kim Jongin in this fic.

His roommate Yixing
BABY! AND XIULAY!!

Can you feel my heart racing too?
/SCREAMS INTO THE NIGHT. WHY WHY WHY. THIS IS SO CUTE AND I’M DELRIOUS.

Tired and sated, they’d climbed into Kyungsoo’s narrow single bed with Kyungsoo lying nearest to the wall while Jongin spooned him.
Here I am like fanning myself because of the previous scene and then you add spooning and I am...I am in paaaaaaain. But it’s good pain! Does that...even make sense? I'm just...yeah, it was good lol.


/collapses by your feet. Please, teach me the ways of weaving such an effortless story. I swear that I was so enraptured that I heard and saw nothing else other than this for an hour...or however long it took because I was so wrapped up in the world that I honestly have no time what it is or when I started. I really, reaaaaaally, despised Jongin's braid thing he had going for Wolf, but I didn't mind it here at all, a testament to your writing skills because I don't know if I would have read this otherwise if it wasn't you writing it. I'm just...this is so great. I felt (more than) a little bad for Kyungsoo, but mostly I kind of just wanted to shake him and go, "You're cute! You're attractive! Nerds are cool, too!" But I know that feeling, that when you've heard the same thing over and over and seen the same thing over and over through life that you kind of just...believe it until it's the only thing you know. I could definitely relate, but I'm glad that Jongin will be there to help him and let him know that he's beautiful no matter what. I also liked how they went slow, how they didn't immediately get down and dirty, but more than that, the EMOTIONS. The longing and then happiness and the slight fear (and dumb worry over GPA, Kyungsoo you idiot, you're smart, you can make it) and ahhh I loved it all. I'll stop rambling now, but I just want to thank you for writing this!! Brilliant as always!

[lotusk]

Thank you!!!!

[lotusk]

You always say the loveliest things abt my writing catbear - especially when I'm not feeling too confident abt things. Bless you for being such a dear friend and I love you lots!

[lotusk]

Crushes can be so awkward and embarrassing and I hope I captured some of that here. Thanks for reading and commenting!

[lotusk]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

[read0write.livejournal.com]

wah~ that was so nice and like yes and yes and yes and just alsdfj;lasdkjfl;adsjaf
but omg chanyeol wanting to hit on kyungsoo but jongin cockblocking XDDD that's too adorable
but ha! i had a feeling jongin kept borrowing the pen because he liked kyungsoo, just so he could keep talking to him or such
heeheehee so cute~
and kyungsoo all worried about his grades but with his major, definitely need to worry :3 but so cute, jongin was definitely adorable :)

[denimgege.livejournal.com]

/emits small noises of distress/ THIS IS AMAZING OHHUGJUGJUHGU

Tho i cant picture jongin with long hair ;A; i wonder how he'd look like o)--(

[lotusk]

I'm so overwhelmed by these comments, seriously!! I never expected Kyungsoo to resonate with anyone so much and I'm just ... thanks for sharing all this with me, Michelle /hugs you lots. Also I love your comments a lot okay? They're always such a joy to read ;;;;;;

[lotusk]

Jongin was totally being obvious about his crush LMAO. only Kyungsoo would be so dense as to not pick up on it!

[lotusk]

thank you! And I've linked the photo of jongin with cornrows so now other people who are wondering will be able to see too!

[whyplanet26.livejournal.com]

adele ;;;;;;;;
i swear to the skies above you write such wonderful and incredible things and im just *whimpers at the awesomeness*
every time i read something of your it feels just so real and believable because of all the details and emotions and the inner dialogue. its just amazing.
that aside, LONG HAIR JONGINNNNNNN such cutie. im totally in love with nerd! soo tho he is just so adorkable at all times that i wanna pet him and tell him to chill and live life a bit.
also goth chanyeol and his ripped attires. bless your mind, lady. cuz im smitten.

<3

[lotusk]

So glad you liked it, yy! This isn't awesomeness omg - just me writing out my Jongin feels bc I have way too many. But thanks for saying such nice things! /hugs

Also, long-haired Jongin is everything LOL.

[illusiontooreal.livejournal.com]

OMG FIRSTLY. I FLINCHED SO HARD WHEN I SAW "OCTAGON THEATRE" AND "TATTERSALL" OMGGGG UWA YOOOO. AhhhhHhhHHHHH
AAhhhhHhhHHHHHhhHhhHHHHH. (octagon is so far away from everything omg)

Okay going back to read the rest of it. I got super excited there HAHA

[lotusk]

I COULD NOT RESIST! I USED TO HAVE ECONS LECTURES IN THE OCTAGON PMSL

[amaxingbaek.livejournal.com]

ORZ it was so long and T.T I didn't even realize I had copy-pasted that much until I hit the add a comment button and it was like "You have exceeded..."

People are such assholes lmao. Like just because my eyesight is bad does not give correlation to being smart and nerdy. I've never understood how glasses equates to nerd, but whatever xD

/jumps on you and purrs

[lotusk]

People are assholes indeed! I got my first pair of glasses when I was 8 so trust me, I know what assholes they can be.

And you're so much more than your eyesight anyway - I'm glad you know that!

[amaxingbaek.livejournal.com]

Lol I think I've basically had them my whole life xD But the jokes on them because more and more people have to get glasses these days. I find that...when people make nerd jokes like that, I just giggle to myself because I would rather be smart than ignorant.

<333333

[ryousuke-kazaf.livejournal.com]

Ahhhhhhh Nini in braid is my favourite! I enjoy reading this!

[lotusk]

Thank you so so much!

[lotusk]

EXACTLY! and sorry for the atrociously late reply but i didn't get a notif - dammit, LJ!

[amaxingbaek.livejournal.com]

It's okay hahaha <3 I didn't really give much to go off of anyways.

[whyplanet26.livejournal.com]

/hugs back/ im glad you wrote it tbh. or else i would have never known that i need such a pretty image of long-haired jongin in my life.