Distraction

[lotusk]

Title: Distraction
Pairing: Luhan/Minseok
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 5,253 words
Summary: Injured shapeshifter Luhan is desperately seeking a distraction, and he finds it in the form of Dr. Kim Minseok.
Warnings: brief reference to injury and mild violence, sexual innuendos, language, werepanthers, tattoos
Author's note: Originally written for the deerofdawn exchange.


Luhan was trying really hard to focus on the man’s eyes because eye contact was important, and he did have really attractive, almond-shaped eyes that burned with intelligence. He was trying anyway, but the man kept talking, and every time he spoke, Luhan’s attention was drawn to his mouth. His extremely pink, extremely luscious, extremely devastating mouth. It was killing him. And it kept. . .MOVING.

Comments

[laughingvirus.livejournal.com]

Oh look I got a chance to comment right away!! (I'm in the hotel lobby rn uvu)
AND SRSLY ADEEEEELE
WOW
These two are so dumb :( but they're cute, so it's almost ok.... :(
I love the idea with the tattoos, really creative (and heartbreaking why would you)
Their characters are really nice and your writing is always so /fire emoji/ so well written ;;;; you're amazing! *^*<3

[lotusk]

Juliaaaaaa ILYSM!!!!!! I couldn't resist the tattoos. It seemed like the ultimate expression of love Luhan wanted to make but couldn't??? I sped wrote this in less than 4 days so I was rly worried it would suck! So your comment means a lot to me ;;;;;;

[goyangiprince.livejournal.com]

xiuhaaaannnnn :'( I loved this fic, I love how you showed their struggle to show each other how much they cared (Luhan's snowflake tattoos!! that's so heartbreakingly cute omggg) and how sweet they are together. <3 <3

[lotusk]

I'm so glad you liked the snowflake tattoos. I really wanted that to be about Luhan expressing his love for Minseok the only way he knew how, so thank you for liking them!

[tiggie0307.livejournal.com]

HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA i LOVED THIS THEIR BANTER WAS AMAZING AND OMG LUHAN AND MINSEOK ARE SO DENCE XD

[lotusk]

THEY ARE SO FUCKING DUMB LMAOOOO

[infin7te-xo.livejournal.com]

IM CRYING THIS IS SO AMAZING AND FUNNY AND DUMB AND OMG XIUHAN. I LOVE IT.

[lotusk]

Thank you!! And yes they're the dumbest lol

[kim0h.livejournal.com]

Oww Luhannie... gummy smiles are life!
I loled non-stop with the (super cute) dummy duo XD
Thank youuu! ❄❄

[lotusk]

I'm so glad it made you laugh! ^^

[shinealightrose.livejournal.com]

I am immensely distracted by Luhan in panther form rubbing along Minseok's legs... getting pet, scratched behind the ears, purring...
I think there was more to this fic but that ^^ just ... s;dklfwj

Ok ok back to the rest of it. I love Luhan here so much, he's such a little shit but somehow so endearing. And Minseok with his snowglobes and his concern about Luhan's health. "Oh, it's you." Sighs.. Minseok.. and your 'disinterest'
So cute and fuzzy and this is the lamest comment ever I'm sorry. This happens to me when it's xiuhan. <3

[lotusk]

Bless you for liking panther Lu scent-marking Minseok bc that's my favourite scene in this fic and i'm just glad someone liked it too ;-; that's supposed to be the scene with the most emotionality but i'm not sure i pulled it off :/

Thanks for reading and leaving me this lovely comment ;;;; (ps: so was the final scene of your lukai a prelude to xiuhan? Or nah? Coughs)

[shinealightrose.livejournal.com]

It had so much emotion in that scene!! Don't you dare think you didn't pull it off!

(All roads lead to xiuhan- if I have anything higher than head canon, this is supreme head canon)

[lotusk]

Thank you, Rosie! AND I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT!

>.> for misleading me with that "Minseok, you mean that babyfaced boy I never ship Luhan with, even at the very end of a Kailu fic? You jest..." /WAVES FIST?

and all the roads lead to xiuhan lol - there's a reason why they're side pairing in so many of my longfics! i love them so much

[karlaurdanetac.livejournal.com]

Asdfkhakslfkckajahad❤
I'm dying here, omg!
I'm more of a Hunhan shipper, but this was amazing!

[lotusk]

Thank you so much!

[(Anonymous)]

okay, so I finally read this and I'm commenting as anonymous so you won't know who I am. :3

Aaaaaahhhh so cute! And their dialogues with each other are so fresh. I absolutely love xiuhan's bantering here and shape-shifting luhan! That's a brilliant idea tbh. The snowflakes tattoos added a nice effect too. Luhan tattooing snowflakes on his skin for Minseok, despite them getting removed every time he shifts. Sigh.

Luhan being a panther tho, that I can imagine. And a terribly dense one at that too. haha.

Zitao's character in the beginning! Yaaaaaas, be territoriaaaaaal.

This was such a nice read, Adele! Thank you. :)

[lotusk]

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story ;;;; but I wish I knew who you were so I could thank you properly. But either way, I'm so grateful that you read and shared your thoughts about it ♡