Honestly... I couldn't decide which to read, so I read both. Ehehe... I'm not into her-fics so sorry about that one but anyway...
This fanfiction made my heart fall and soar, taking turns and I have to admit that I am emotionally spent for the evening. Holy shit.
The emotional atmosphere and sensuality of everything was almost overpowering. --- before I forget it I have to point out how amazing I think you put all the side characters into the bar and scenes before it was only SuKai ; especially my babies Tao and Amber /screeches ---
I absolutely adored the memory of their first kiss and just everything in that scenery and how I could almost smell the moist air and the wood of the bridge while reading it, - I need to keep myself from cursing again even if it's just for emphasis.
Just like in the story I read before you managed to make me melt into a pool of emotions with only a couple of words: "Jongin tasted of yesterdays and tomorrows. Jongin tasted of forever." - and I will cry myself to sleep because of that - I'm too emotionally attached again but it was really, really beautiful.
I still think it can't be only my own hyper-sensitivity (that's not even a joke, I'm super empathic which can suck sometimes) that makes me feel so much whenever I read your heart-felt stories - it's how you write them as well. It's as if you gather up all the emotions and just push them all into the words like my sister uses to try and clean up her room but as soon as someone (me) pokes around the text everything blunders out and buries me alive like clothes falling out of an overstuffed wardrobe.
What I am trying to say is: this was wonderful and you can be really, really proud of your work (generally - really Adele!). <3
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Ehehe... I'm not into her-fics so sorry about that one but anyway...
This fanfiction made my heart fall and soar, taking turns and I have to admit that I am emotionally spent for the evening. Holy shit.
The emotional atmosphere and sensuality of everything was almost overpowering.
--- before I forget it I have to point out how amazing I think you put all the side characters into the bar and scenes before it was only SuKai ; especially my babies Tao and Amber /screeches ---
I absolutely adored the memory of their first kiss and just everything in that scenery and how I could almost smell the moist air and the wood of the bridge while reading it, - I need to keep myself from cursing again even if it's just for emphasis.
Just like in the story I read before you managed to make me melt into a pool of emotions with only a couple of words:
"Jongin tasted of yesterdays and tomorrows. Jongin tasted of forever." - and I will cry myself to sleep because of that - I'm too emotionally attached again but it was really, really beautiful.
I still think it can't be only my own hyper-sensitivity (that's not even a joke, I'm super empathic which can suck sometimes) that makes me feel so much whenever I read your heart-felt stories - it's how you write them as well.
It's as if you gather up all the emotions and just push them all into the words like my sister uses to try and clean up her room but as soon as someone (me) pokes around the text everything blunders out and buries me alive like clothes falling out of an overstuffed wardrobe.
What I am trying to say is: this was wonderful and you can be really, really proud of your work (generally - really Adele!). <3