A Room With a View (With Deepest Apologies to E.M. Forster)

[lotusk]

Title: A Room With a View (With Deepest Apologies to E.M. Forster)
Pairing: Sehun / Chanyeol
Rating: NC17
Genre: pwp, literature kink (don't ask me what this is because I have no clue)
Length: 2188 words
Summary: Words are the most seductive things and Sehun and Chanyeol like them just a little too much.
Warnings: How do I warn for literature kink and badly written smut? Chanyeol and Sehun get off on words? IDEK
A/N: Thanks bluedreaming for this devilishly irresistible prompt, teatimetaemint for picking reader Sehun, skyroll for the visuals and exollent & carpesoo for convincing me I could write NC17 Chanhun. I am still pretty sure I can’t write NC17 Chanhun BUT HEY, I TRIED. Apologies to EVERYONE (I’m not even kidding).


Words were especially alluring when they fell from Sehun's pink mouth, and Chanyeol's body thrummed with anticipation...because it was Sehun's turn today.

Comments

[teatimetaemint.livejournal.com]

I'm... so... holy hell.
HOLY FREAKIN CHANHUN

I feel like I just had an epiphany moment. I love literature kink. I need more literature kink in my life.
This was just... I don't even have the words!

Everything about this was just so... vivid, but in a unobtrusive way? (Holy shit, I sound like an idiot.) What I mean is, the mood you set, the descriptions, the images you sparked in my mind, it was all so powerful, but at the same time the story itself was almost gentle and humorous and just /sighs happily
Since I can't seem to put this in a way that makes some actual sense I'll just have to tell you that: Damn woman, this was downright brilliant.

And don't worry! The fact that you waited until 1.9k for 'actual penetration' (as you put it so beautifully LMAO xD) was probably a plus. Just... the tension!!! I felt it through my screen, holy shit. I was seriously at the edge of my seat by the time this 'drabble' (/snorts) ended!
And you made him read until the very end. Let me love you, wonderful person! I can't even tell you how hot that was. IT WAS SO HOT OKAY?!
I think I'm going to take a cold shower now. (Or I'll just eat a lot of ice cream. Which sounds infinitely more pleasant. LOL)

I really hope I'll be able to recover from this.

[lotusk]

He had to read to the end - that was the whole point because literature kink lol. That's why whoever did the reading had to be the bottom kekeke. I'm so so glad you liked it Jenni /glomps you

[thesockmonster.livejournal.com]

I should have had coffee before reading this. Oh shit.

[lotusk]

Lmao why is coffee necessary for digesting bad smut?!!!

[thesockmonster.livejournal.com]

It was necessary for my brain to comprehend the amount of hot I just read. /fans self

[lotusk]

Pissing!!!

[hojichadust.livejournal.com]

Wow this was actually pretty cool!! I've never heard of literature kink before and it was really a new inventive way of showing that one half of otp gets turned on by the other half's voice. I've never read anything like it and it was a pleasant surprise. Nice work Adele you've evolved into fanfic trendsetter ^^

(ps the smut was also A+ i fuckin love seyeol u made my day)

[lotusk]

definitely not a trendsetter, Emily lol but thanks so much for reading this and I'm glad you liked it!

[decendium.livejournal.com]

I jUtUsrUst CHanUhupOrnZ *0*

[lotusk]

thank you, i think. LOL

[exollent.livejournal.com]

This is a very creative way to write voice kink! I enjoyed all the descriptions you used. :)) It helped in the buildup of a very sensually charged atmosphere and of course, I love the added mention of Sehun going commando. Very, very hot omg. /nosebleeds

You did a great job and I hope you will revisit this ship again, Adele! :)

[lotusk]

i'm ... the sehun commando thing was a whim and i'm glad you approve LOL. so now i've completed sekai going commando even if they didn't do it together. Maybe i need to write sekai fic where they're both commando. hmmm

[(Anonymous)]

I HAVE NOT CAME ACROSS ANYTHING LIKE THINGS BUT HOLY COW I'M NOT REGRETTING A SINGLE THING.

AND CHANYEOL GETS ALL RILED UP BY SEHUN'S VOICE READING OUT THE BEAUTIFUL WORDS AND PRETTY SENTENCES AND SEHUN GETTING TEASED EVEN BEFORE THEY BEGIN AND -CORRECT ME IF IM WRONG- ITS KIND OF THEIR THING LIKE THEY DO IT OFTEN AND ITS JUST SO /SCREECHES/


love it, dammit. why you are you so damn good at this.

*mumbles mumbles*

[lotusk]

Yes! it's totally their thing - they take turns lol. AND YES THEY DO IT OFTEN /screeches back/ thank you for reading and commenting!

[springmaid.livejournal.com]

Woot! You managed to finish it!

Also.
Nobody warned me someone went commando.
How can I unsee this?

Literature kink + almost public sex = best
I absolutely love their conversations during sex, makes it more realistic lol. Especially with Chanyeol wanting to do it with the windows open (what a smug giant bastard) while Sehun argues with him. Ghad, that last part where Chanyeol says its his favorite chapter made me go all mushy inside.

(lemme just drown in the feels)

also. sitting. on. chanyeol's. dick. while. reading.

how to be sehun tbh.

[lotusk]

sorry for not alerting you about the commando thing but that would kinda have spoilt the surprise lol. i'm glad you liked it gem!!! hahaha at how to be sehun - i'll leave that to you bc it's not like i want to be anywhere near chanyeol's d. i mean .. LOLOL

[bringnsexsebaek.livejournal.com]

OMG SO CREATIVE
I really enjoyed this~ never read anything of this sort, hehe. I mean, this is taking getting off on someone's voice to a whole new level xD but I totally understand. Hearing such flowery words rolling off of Sehun's tongue would just be... unf. somuchunf. and if this is badly written smut then idk what the hell /I/ write ahahaha it was great~~ all of this was great! I don't come across much Chanhun, but I really like them together. *claps for you*
OH AND THE COMMANDO THING just... that is just too hot, it always gets me lmfao

[lotusk]

So happy you liked it! I was worried a lot of people would be freaked out by this lit kink thing so it's such a huge relief that some readers have enjoyed it even if they'd never read anything like it before. So THANK YOU!

[bringnsexsebaek.livejournal.com]

hehehe it is super doubtful that anyone would be freaked out by it~ it's such a... mild kink. Ya know? It's just different~ ahaha no reason to thank me c:

[skyroll.livejournal.com]

i'm happy you finished this! and it did not disappoint one bit! everything is so deliciously charged and perfect! yes yes this is the best! also i am in love with chanyeol's voyeuristic views tbh

Words were especially alluring when they fell from Sehun's pink mouth, and Chanyeol's body thrummed with anticipation...because it was Sehun's turn today.
they take turns? i can imagine chanyeol's husky voice reading out chapters tbh

“Your turn.” The rich velvet syllables stroked the edges of his senses just before a silky wet tongue wrapped itself around his left earlobe.
don't waste anytime chanyeol

“Rules don’t mean anything unless they’re being broken,”
have i mentioned how much i love your chanyeol?

Fuck you, Park Chanyeol, he muttered under his breath as he removed Chanyeol's wandering hands.
i also love your sehun

Fingers of evening breeze wafted through the narrow slit, lifting a few strands of Sehun’s auburn pink hair as he bent over the book, brows knit with concentration.
yes for pink sehun!

He closed his eyes and soaked it up—the visual impressions starting to pile up as Sehun’s deep, sleep-husky voice enunciated word after beautiful word.
i wonder, does regular study sessions between them also lead to sexy times?

Chanyeol pushed his chest closer to Sehun so his now erect nipples grazed his bony back.
omg!

Chanyeol smirked as he palmed the obvious bulge in Sehun’s pants, laughing as Sehun swatted his hands away—not that it deterred his fingers from skimming the waistband of Sehun's jeans, fingertips slipping beneath.
what an ass i love it

"Keep reading," Chanyeol said as he tugged Sehun's shirt collar down to expose an impossibly broad shoulder.
a very big ass

Sehun didn't like zippers and Chanyeol always forgot to ask why.
but...why?

"We were walking all over the campus just now and you failed to mention you weren't wearing underpants?!"
the important question

"I didn't want to give you a hard-on in public,"
this power though

“Keep reading, Sehun...the words, I love the way you make words sound."
this is oddly hot

Then Sehun's hands were reaching beneath, searching for Chanyeol's button and zipper. Surprisingly efficient, he managed to undo the button and work the zipper down.
skills!

“Let them. I like the view,”
CHANYEOL NO

Chanyeol stared in open appreciation at the delectable, rounded bottom and long, long legs, the hard length of his arousal.
i like the thought of sehun walking around their room naked from time to time

HOT SEXY TIMES YES

"Tenderness," Chanyeol mouthed as he plunged into Sehun one last torrid time and groaned in bliss as he spilled himself, while Sehun came onto his clean cotton sheets with a breathy oh fuck.
tenderness is my new favorite word

"You say that about every fucking chapter, Park Chanyeol,"
that's cute though like boyfriends cute omg

this was amazeballs and you know it and we know it! ;>

[lotusk]

Ugh your comment is making me want to write a sequel where I answer all your questions and it's Chanyeol's turn. WHYYYYYY???

[read0write.livejournal.com]

asjdf;laksdjf;laskdjf ;laksdj lj wah hahahahhahahaha
OMG!!!! heeheehee hahahaha
omg chanyeol :P but sehun ;) freakin' hahahahaha the no underwear thing was genius omg!!!! FREAKIN' SEHUN! how chanyeol survives is beyond me o.o

[lotusk]

IDK HOW CHANYEOL SURVIVES EITHER?!!!! Glad you liked it, Tiffany lol

[charliebnim.livejournal.com]

OH FUCK, THIS WAS SO EROTIC I AM WHEEZING

[lotusk]

SHOULD I WRITE A SEQUEL WHERE IT'S CHANYEOL'S TURN?!

[charliebnim.livejournal.com]

YESSSSSSS !!!!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEE PLEASEEEE ADELE PLEASE OMFG

[lotusk]

I've got some ideas alrdy thanks to ansa and another friend. But not sure when I'll have time to work on it orz. But I will!

[carpesoo.livejournal.com]

omfg, adele. this was just..... //wheezes. please don't be silly when you say you don't know how to chanhun porn because this was hot af.... //fans self.

the thought of sehun still reading to chanyeol as he's thrusting into him...... why isnt this a thing? or like..... a more known thing.... there needs to be more lit kink? omg.... its so bloody sexual.... im... wow. okies. //exhales.

i loved how they tried to rile each other up before they even started.. and the touching... sehun sitting on chanyeol's lap as chanyeol's hand explore and roam sehun's body and sebulge.... and commando sehun? //closes eyes. no seriously... i dont think i can accurately portray how much i enjoyed this.... i feel like im seconds away from a nosebleed xdxd

i am so weak for chanhun and you have made me even more so.... this was brilliant, adele. it really was, i loved every single word of it......

i would very much like to read a sequel with chanyeol reading because damn, his voice is just pure sex. //nods furiously. and the whole thing is just sexual.... oh so very sexual and its just love. i love this. i love them. i may even love you (//whispers i do).

sorry for my shite comment.. but yes.. lots of loves to be sent to you //throws hearteus.

[carpesoo.livejournal.com]

p.s. sorry for being late to the party.

//slides away.

[lotusk]

Omg this was anything but a shite comment (also thanks for reminding me how much I love the word shite - even more than I love the word bollocks lol)! I'm so relieved I didn't mess up the chanhun porn then lol bc first time and all. And don't worry about not being to comment earlier - real life happens :) and you more than made it for it with this wonderful comment! Thanks DM!

[eoryndal.livejournal.com]

I've been craving some ChanHun lately and what better opportunity to read one of your fics than this? ^^ First of all, I love how you described them together, especially their matching strides <3 Equally long legs~ And the way Chanyeol is so enamoured with Sehun.

And I love the way all the lovely little details that fill your stories really bring the settings to life. *_____* I could see the buildings on campus and the curtains and the desk inside ChanHun's room perfectly, even the way the winds billows the curtains a little and all of that. You write so beautifully ;A; <3

Also, the smut was hot, UNF when Sehun could only read parts of sentences, wow

[lotusk]

damnit how did i miss this comment argh!!! i found this bc I'm kinda moving all my things to ao3 now bc *j is so ugh ugh ugh right now. Thanks for reading this Eo and I'm so happy you liked this, finding this comment really made my day. I haven't seen you online in ages but ily and miss you!