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lotusk ([personal profile] lotusk) wrote2015-04-16 02:39 am

The Delinquent

Title:The Delinquent
Rating:PG-13
Pairing: Joonmyun/Jongin
Length: ~5k words
Summary:Joonmyun is a delinquent with a thing for his shy neighbor, Jongin, who plays the violin like an angel.
Genre:Romance, mild angst, highschool au
Notes: Inspired by this picture of Joonmyun being r00d. Comments are very much loved ♥



Spring was still thin in the air and Joonmyun had never liked the cold much so he was grateful for the warmth his black leather jacket gave him. Taking another languid drag on his cigarette, he watched the paper glow bright with vermilion embers.

[identity profile] jumpthisship.livejournal.com 2015-04-15 08:00 pm (UTC)(link)
ADELE.

MY HEART.

holy heck. i think this might have been one of my favourite things ever written by you. i just. WOW. i cried a lot??? my chest started aching at "it's not like you haven't tasted..." and it kept aching more and more until i had wet cheeks, right around "jongin wants me. he loves me." AND THEN I COULDN'T STOP??? i don't know why this affected me so much, but i was a little wibbling mess. Jongin's "aren't you happy for me?" destroyed me. UGH. i adored joonmyun's parts, the way he just needed jongin and how lost and broken without him. your language was so emotive, i don't even know how to explain it. and you're always so perfectly descriptive. fantastic. and jongin's parts were amazing, too. he just loved so purely, and so completely. he didn't care about joonmyun's record, because he saw beneath that, and it was beautiful. ugh. i loved it, seriously. and i'm such a sucker for musically talented characters i'm *-* i fell in love with jongin tbh. him whispering his secrets to no one...that killed me, too. my poor baby ;;;;

kyungsoo the secret violinist was such a highlight of this fic LOL i just died. i'd love to read about HIS story ;D

and i'm so so happy they were able to put everything behind them and that they're going to be together in New York just. BLESS. i'm so happy that they're happy, and the fact that i felt so strongly about these characters from such a short fic was a testament to your writing talent, i think. they're so in love and it makes me so happy. <3 bravo, adele!! i simultaneously wanted it to be longer and thought it was ridiculously perfect as is.

also, i read this on my phone so i didn't click the picture link, but i totally knew which one you were talking about lol. joonmyun whyyyyy.

[identity profile] jumpthisship.livejournal.com 2015-04-16 02:13 pm (UTC)(link)
you can definitely write things that make people cry! or at least make me cry, because i'm a weepy baby :P
you DEFINITELY succeeded!! very well done *__*
omg thug!soo the secret violinist plEASE. i absolutely adored that detail. i hope he has a good reason for being such a troublemaker though lol

[identity profile] jumpthisship.livejournal.com 2015-04-16 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
his rebellion isn't very quiet, lol, it sounds like he's quite vocal about it ;) unless his mom doesn't know...
i am very interested in this

[identity profile] jumpthisship.livejournal.com 2015-04-22 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
OOOOOOOOOO i am so intrigued