Only You Can Make Me Feel This Way

[lotusk]

Title: Only You Can Make Me Feel This Way
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Yifan/Jongin
Length: 1867 words
Genre: pwp, fluff, romance, domestic
Summary: Jongin and Yifan can't agree on who is more impatient.
Notes: For thesockmonster because I love her.

Hi Bunny, I know I told you your birthday fic would be horribly late but...I guess it decided it wanted to be early instead. Oops? So anyways, Happy Birthday! ♡



They've done the dishes and showered, so they've got nothing but time now.

Comments

[thesockmonster.livejournal.com]

Fuck I forgot about the damn matching pink underwear. You've gone and killed me. I'm a mushy bundle of fluffy, grossly affectionate nerves AND IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT. THEY ARE SO CHEESY AND STUPID IN LOVE AND I LOVE YOU THE MOST! /wails forever over this perfection

[lotusk]

OMG it's hardly perfect!! But I tried my best and I hope I didn't do too badly with my first kairis lol. I promised you I'd write them one day - it just took me two fucking years to get round to it pls don't hate me!

I love you bunny and I hope you have a wonderful, stress-free birthday full of pampering ♡

[bluedreaming]

There will NEVER be enough kairis in the world EVER and this was so delicious with Yifan not being afraid, in this safe relationship, to get what he needs and also love without holding back. *tears come to my eyes* I LOVE how you kept everything so balanced, so back and forth and the physical embodiment of cheerful banter between an established couple; it's beautiful. and pink underwear lol cute

I think Jongin's line sums this up beautifully: "I just want."

Because sometimes that's all you need. That's enough.

[lotusk]

Cries all over your comment bc you always make my fics sound so much better than they they actually are ;;;;;;

[bluedreaming]

I can read your heart ♡

[lotusk]

Ansa TT___TT

[bluedreaming]

Sends hugs

[karlaurdanetac.livejournal.com]

This is the most perfect thing I've ever read❤
They are indeen cheesy, but I love the together, asdkhfadjg I'm dying.
Perfect, so f****** perfect!

[lotusk]

Thank you! The recipient wanted them to be gross lol. I hope if worked ^^

[karlaurdanetac.livejournal.com]

It totally did alsdhakfg❤

[blondejongins.livejournal.com]

oh my gooooooood kairis fluffy smut ♡♡♡ im so happy omg thank you so much for writing this??? kairis is so precious and this was so cute aaaaa thank you ♡♡♡

[lotusk]

You're most welcome ♡

[seafoamblues.livejournal.com]

"Jongin is half-hard before Yifan's tongue even touches his skin."
ah yes yifan's tongue and jongin's cock this is the shit i like
"Jongin's moans are low and broken as Yifan sucks on his nipples."
ROARS
this entire thing tho. roars some more.
"It's fully erect now after all the attention Yifan has lavished on his nipples."
GOOD
"Yifan smirks just before he takes Jongin's entire length into his mouth in one long, wet slide."
FUCK
i love how they talk to each other and omg the undies tho
"Yifan licks the soft spaces inside Jongin's thigh."
cries softly
"I love you," Jongin moans into his mouth, "I love you so much and I haven't told you today that I do."
WTF THIS IS SO CUTE IM GONNA POOP
mmmmmm yaaaaaaaas jongin on top
fuck i love frottage
"I hope you can last a little longer, old man,"
BAHAHAHA
WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!!!! WHA THT EF UCK!!!!!! WHA THRT E UFF CK UF FKC UJF oh MY GOD
OH Y MG O D
BOTTOM!KYIFAN
OH YM MgOFFUD CKIGN GOD
ADELE
WHAT THE FU CK
I CANNT BREATHE IM FUCKING OUT TA HEERE IM FLINGING MYSELF OUT THE WINDOW
SCREECHES
"Are you ready for me,"
WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!! EHA TTH ETHE FUCK ADELE UR FKCN KILL IN ME
"with Jongin, Yifan doesn't have to be tough and strong. He can lean on Jongin and be himself—his true self. He knows he can always lean on Jongin and just...need and Jongin will always be there for him."
<3
"and all Yifan wants now, all he needs to complete him, is to have Jongin inside him."
cryin
"Oh God, I want you so much,"
MMGGGGHhhhhhhhhh
fck yes take that cock yifan
man i love their relationship so much
THIS IS SO CUTE N HOT IM GONNA JUMP OFF A BUILDING BYE

[lotusk]

Imma conclude that you approve of bottom!kris? I enjoyed reading your comment so much! Thank you Sheryl! /flings self at you!

[suri711.livejournal.com]

ahhh this was such an amazing read ;; so emotional and gosh, i could feel the love between jongin and yifan so strongly

"I love you," Jongin moans into his mouth, "I love you so much and I haven't told you today that I do."

"I love you too," Yifan whispers as he kisses Jongin back and wills his heart not to explode from all the love he feels for the boy in his arms.
LIKE GOD, THIS WAS JUST T_______________T they love each other so much and it's so nice to see them openly admit it without a care in the world

"Are you ready for me," Jongin asks softly, his low, husky voice and his hot breath tantalising against Yifan's right earlobe.
read this in a public place and tried not to squeak bc OMG

aahaihsduifhsdi this was too stunning!! >w<

[lotusk]

Yes they do! They love each other heaps and heaps. Thank you for reading and for leaving me such a lovely comment! Pls don't read smut in public places orz

[xxhna.livejournal.com]

/screaming/

OMG this is so sweet????

It started off super hot and heavy and then THEN it was just filled with so much love and passion and omg i have so much love for this.

They are just so in love and I LOVE THAT. Just the way you wrote about the passion and care in their eyes, as they shared that type of intimacy with each other omgosh I felt that it was almost sacred? As it is really showing an act of bonding between two people who love each other. OMG. What it is to have that in your life such a gift!


THIS MAKES ME HAPPY.

[lotusk]

OMG thank you so much for liking this! It was my first time writing kairis so I was really worried I wouldn't be able to pull it off? So your comment makes me so happy! Ilysm!!!!

[read0write.livejournal.com]

oh man, that was great heeheehee
that matching pink underwear *wiggles eyebrows*
heeheehee so cute and sweet and so fluffy domestic~

[lotusk]

Haha thanks, Tiffany!! Blame Migo underpants for this fic LOL

[thesockmonster.livejournal.com]

Read it again. Still perfect.

[lotusk]

Bunnyyyyyyy! I'm just so glad you like it ;;;;