Bucket Lists and Blind Dates

[lotusk]

Title: Bucket Lists and Blind Dates
Author: lattelotus
Rating: PG
Pairings: Jongin/Kyungsoo
Length: 2800 words
Summary: Kyungsoo is nervous about going on a blind date, but when his date turns out to be pregnant, he really doesn’t know what to do!
Warnings: mpreg and cheese, lots of cheese (pls forgive the cheese)
Notes: a very belated birthday fic for bookishvice.



Kyungsoo fussed with the buttons on his black linen shirt, for what seemed like the 250th time. Part of him was looking forward to meeting someone new while another part of him—the obnoxiously loud part—was worried he'd just signed up for an evening of excruciating stretches of awkward silence.

But he was probably overthinking things. His blind date might turn out to be a really nice guy. It could happen. But Baek had been so unhelpful and secretive: His name is Jongin and he’s 23. Tall, good-looking, charming. A mouth like yours. As descriptions went, it was pretty damned useless, but he'd decided to take the plunge anyway.

Comments

[bookishvice.livejournal.com]

Hi!!! Thank you so much for this unexpected surprise <3

Mpreg Jongin is one of my favorite things out there and there is just not enough of it. SO BLESS YOU. He was so cute and confident admitting to being terrified but still courageous enough to do the bucket list thing.

Shy and semi anti-social Kyungsoo was SO VERY ME!?! I kept reading and just laughing because OMG why is she describing me?!

His smile infected Kyungsoo with a warmth and appetite for life he hadn't experienced in a long time. Where had all his energy gone?
This is me. Wondering where my desire to live and do things has gone.

“All I do is study and do assignments and take exams and sleep and play DotA. And wow, summing my life up in one sentence like that makes it sound like the worst kind of lame.”
This is me.I am this level of lame. Yes.

I will definitely save this fic and come back to it whenever I need a little pick me up, a little push to come out into the sunlight!!

As he watched Jongin’s eyes brighten with excitement, Kyungsoo felt the bottom of the floor drop from beneath his feet. He felt like he was falling. . .and it had nothing to do with ropes and water.
BEAUTIFUL

Jongin insisted, giving him the warmest, most devastating smile and Kyungsoo knew he would not be walking out of this restaurant with his heart still in his own possession.
KAISOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO /WAILS

[lotusk]

I'm so glad you liked it, Amy! I'm just sorry it took me so so so long to get this written - I still owe so many people birthday fics /faints. I think all of us have a bit of Kyungsoo in them but it's such an unexpected bonus that he resonates with you. Serendipity! As for mpreg Jongin - I hope he turned out the way you envisioned ^^ the way we discussed the prompt months ago. Even if this is months way too late, happy birthday, Amy!

[featherpheonix.livejournal.com]

oh my...... this is the most beautiful thing i've read recently! i completely love it, from the plotline to the usage of words and development of action. it's beautiful really.
i like how you portray emotions with words, how neat your writing is. is pleasant to read and i'd read it any other time! congratulations, it's a piece of art tbh.
// aw, i find kyungsoo endering with his protective side of jongin and jongin, well.... you had me at "maneuvering carefully so he could avoid the edge of the table. " . also him having a wish list makes it even better :)
thank you for writing this.

[lotusk]

You're most welcome! It's the first time I've written mpreg so I was super worried people wouldn't like it so your comment means a lot to me. As for Jongin maneuvering around the edge of the table - haha that was me when I was pregnant lol. Thanks for reading!

[jumpthisship.livejournal.com]

Adele! For someone who's never written mpreg before, I thought you wrote it really well! It didn't seem awkward or uncomfortable or anything. Like it's just a fact of life. This fic was super adorable, and Jongin was so sweet and charming, and Kyungsoo was so blunt I had to giggle. Lovely little fic, as usual <3 I have the feeling these two will work out splendidly ^^

[lotusk]

Beccaaaaa! Thanks for saying all the nice things ;;;; It's taken me ridiculously long to get round to writing mpreg considering I've been pregnant twice myself /rolls eyes at self/ I think this didn't turn out so badly but i much prefer the ones you wrote better - especially the closet kaisoo one coughs. Did you ever post that after all? hint hint

[jumpthisship.livejournal.com]

LOL i didn't. It's too embarrassing xD i'll just keep it hidden away in the depths of my gdocs. (but you're welcome to read it anytime.)
you deserve all the nice words! it turned out wonderfully <3

[lotusk]

thank you so much! /rolls around

[daestruct.livejournal.com]

MAMAAAAA.
I enjoyed this so much! I loved your characters- their shy nature, their need to reach out... it was very calming and nice? WHY ARENT ALL FIRST DATES SO NICE?
I also adored how the pregnancy was there and it was discussed but it wasn't... invasive to the story? I don't know everything just worked so well!
Thank you for writing this!

[lotusk]

ASHHHHHH! Thank you for reading this - it means so much to me ;;;; I wasn't sure if I was doing things right even bc i haven't read a whole lot of mpreg fics so this is reassuring! Also this was the most boring first date ever lmao. all they did was sit there all night like potatoes omg. thanks again for reading sobs

[dubudork.livejournal.com]

Ohhh I like this twist a lot! And of course having a baby would be high on Jongin's bucket list, he's always wanted to be a parent. I would love a sequel!

[lotusk]

The bucket list twist is the recipient bookishvice' sides though so credit should go to her ^^ maybe one day I'll write something else in this au

[eexiee.livejournal.com]

i usually HATE HATE HATE mpreg but this was so sweet and i just want to read mooooooooooooooore <3 <3 i love it and i love pregnant nini and manly af kyungsoo yesssss more more more

[lotusk]

Pregnant Nini is the most precious thing - I think we can both agree on that lol. It's my first time writing mpreg myself so I'm glad people don't seem to hate my take on the genre. Thanks for reading and I hope I can revisit this au!

[kaitrapped.livejournal.com]

this made me smile..
it's been a while since I read any mpreg fics for reasons but this was a breath of fresh air and I loved both jongin and Kyungsoo's characters here(this is also my first mpreg with jongin as the pregnant one and I like that)~ I've had a long day I'm more or less a rl version of Kyungsoo's char here lol (I act went outside home td to hangout with friends for the entire day and it's been a while since I've act had fun with ppl) so the response ksoo got from jongin when he called his life /lame/ made me feel so serene smh I felt like he was comforting me too in a way idk but yeah I was listening to bts' butterfly while reading the story and it was perfect cause kyungsoo is falling for jongin's beautiful everyth like the song hhhh
thanks adele I'm sad this is short but I'm basking in them feels rn as always u nvr disappoint //sorry I rumble so mch omg//

[lotusk]

I have to confess I've read very few mpreg fics and this is actually the first I've written lol, but I'm so glad people seem to like it okay! I hope you get dragged into the sunlight more often and that you have fun while you're out /hugs/ Also I need to get round to listening to BTS' butterfly as I'm writing two BTS fics atm LOL.

thanks again for reading and for taking the time to comment. Love you, Cina!

[karlaurdanetac.livejournal.com]

Asdkhagakdkshakahdf❤
I'm not used to read mpreg, but I loved this!
Perfect, that's the only word to describe it.

[lotusk]

thank you so much!

[read0write.livejournal.com]

aww so cute and sweet
i enjoyed that mpreg fic ^^
jongin so brave to do artificial insemination
but aww kyungsoo too cute too~
that was just very nice all around :D

[lotusk]

I'm so glad you liked it, Tiffany! Thanks for reading as always /hugs

[ixxxrene.livejournal.com]

Hellooooooo.
I'm sorry for this late comment! =X


"... on the Mediterranean tiled floor."
This still gets me. Italian huh? xD

Kyungsoo realized he'd been staring openly at Jongin's hand as it stroked his bell
/rolls on my bed
The mental image is too much.

He'd always planned on 28 being the right age, so why was he staring across the table at Jongin and thinking that he wouldn't mind being a father to his child at the age of 24?
I LOVE THIS LINE.
You will be (feel) ready when you meet the right person.
This somehow warms my heart? ^^

“I don’t know whether to be flattered or insulted that I’m being used to strike another item off your bucket list,”
“Flattered. Definitely flattered,”
Ah, I get all giddy by just thinking about their next date!

Kyungsoo knew he would not be walking out of this restaurant with his heart still in his own possession.
THIS IS A GREAT LINE TO END THIS SCENE. ♡


I have read this the second time but I still enjoy as much!
I'm always a sucker when authors write mpreg in details.
(I really have weird fascination with pregnancy in general)

Thank you for writing this! ♡ ♡ ♡

[lotusk]

You're most welcome, Irene! And thank you so much for reading this a second time. It means the world to me. Idt I've looked at it since I posted it and maybe I should ;-;